Smut Marathon – Round 2

The results are in for round two of the Smut Marathon, and I am extremely shocked (and happy) to have made it to round three. I really thought I would be eliminated, but I am glad to be able to continue.

The second round was still difficult, but not as hard as the first round was. For the second assignment, our task was to take a metaphor from round one that was not our own and create a flash fiction story that included chosen metaphor. My word count had to be less than 100 words, with the chosen metaphor not part of the 100. I think I had 97 words total, plus the metaphor.

I ended up using my boyfriend’s metaphor for my story, and I managed to fit it into the middle of my piece.

Second Wind

He felt something was different with her tonight. The way that she moaned out in pure ecstasy with each thrust and how she was wetter than ever before. Before he could ask what was on her mind, she blurted out “Right there! Don’t stop. I’m Coming!”

That was all the encouragement he needed to keep going. He had started to feel winded, almost ready to slow down, but her words gave him the second wind that he needed. His world collapsed down to a single point as his friend clenched down tightly onto him, buried deep as he was. Feeling her reach her highest point was all he needed to finally reach his climax, as they came together.

Writing this took several tries. I tried writing it with the metaphor at the beginning and end, but liked it in the middle best. At one point I had a his and hers point of view, that I think explained things a bit better, but it made my piece over 200 words. Below you can read what I had to eliminate, as the word count was too much and the two perspectives did not go together. It was supposed to be the first paragraph.

She had never orgasmed from anything other than a vibrator before, but this time was different. The primal way that he had his hands on her hips, gripping with each thrust, had her feeling a build up from within. Several times she almost asked him to keep going like just like that, but each time she stopped herself in fear of it being another false alarm.

Aaron was entry number 22: Starry Skies – He breathed deeply as he stared into her perfect eyes, glistening like the stars above them. She was the Milky Way, he a speck of sand in awe of her.

“That was amazing,” she said, her voice harried and coarse. Vaginal secretions trailed down his lips; his tongue shot out to grab one. He grinned at her lustful rapture.

“I’m not done,” he said, diving back down to her core. She was his star, and he was going to worship her in any way he could.

Used: #8 – Awe by Stella Kiink

I really liked his, at it had a lot of sexy and romance in it, something I love when reading erotica. I was really sad to see that he did not make it to the third round, and I hope that he will try again next year.

My blog friend’s Nero and May also wrote some good pieces, and I look forward to seeing what they have for the next round.

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